Shop Mobile More Submit  Join Login

:iconneon-roses7: More from neon-roses7

Featured in Collections

X Readers and Fanfictions by PepuRajillon

Spain by yashacat

Hetalia by Sandadoragon-Nina

More from DeviantArt


Submitted on
March 7, 2013
Submitted with Writer


3,562 (3 today)
88 (who?)

        (Name) was walking through town on a breezy, summer day with her friend and crush, Antonio. It was one of those days where the world felt perfect; happy people and peace. Like nothing could go wrong.

"Chica, it's a beautiful day, si?" asked the brunette.

"Yes," she answered, her (h/c) locks blowing in the breeze, "It's beautiful, Toni."

"Not as beautiful as you, mi querida." he replied flirtatiously, his dashing emerald green eyes playful.

        He always did this. The Spainard flirted with any girl, it was kind of disappointing. It hurt sometimes, but she had learned to brush it off.

        They both walked along, (Name)'s (e/c) orbs taking everything they saw. Trees, flowers, people. Then a voice cut in,

"Look, (Name), it's a churros stand!" exclaimed Antonio. "Let's get something to eat while we walk."

        He rushed over to the vendor like a little child being offered the last piece of candy. Purchasing two he said,

                                                                        "Here you go, carina."

        She took a bite into the sugary, cinammony goodness. It coated her lips. She repeated the action, neglecting to lick her lips. It was so delicious. Scrumptious. Tasty. Delectable. She could go on and on.

"You're really enjoying that churro, chica." smirked Antonio.

"It's so good, that's why. Yum." she responded, looking down to wipe crumbs off her clothes.

        When (Name) looked back up her lips met someone elses. She stared wide-eyed at her friend. He was kissing her?!
        His tongue licked her lips clean. Cleaning up ever last crumb. His lips were soft and she could still taste the hint of cinnamon. Just as soon as it started it stopped.
                                                                    "You had somehing there, chica."
                                                                                  "Is that so?"
                                                                                 "Si, (Name)."
                                                                  "Then you better clean me up."




Just a story I had written a while back. This time with Spain! Enjoy!

I don't own Hetalia or you.
The plot is mine.
Add a Comment:
Every one is goin to kill me for this but what do curros taste like ive never had one
neon-roses7 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013
A churro is fried dough that is shaped like a stick. It's covered in cinnamon and sugar. Some of them come with different fillings. Basically, it's delicious! (If you like sweets) I definitely recommend you try one when you have the chance.
Oh ok thanx
neon-roses7 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
My pleasure.
8ShiroYuki8 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013
*reads title* CHURROS~! :iconyayspainplz: there used to be a churro stand in a grocery store we go to sometimes, but it's been years since it was there :iconsadspainplz:
neon-roses7 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
That's sad, I agree. Were the churros good there?
8ShiroYuki8 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
yes, they were quite delicious.
neon-roses7 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
That's even worse.:icontearyeyedplz:
SilverMoon75 Featured By Owner May 28, 2013
That was cute! I liked the playful banter between the reader and Toni.
neon-roses7 Featured By Owner May 28, 2013
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Add a Comment: