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        (Name) was walking through town on a breezy, summer day with her friend and crush, Antonio. It was one of those days where the world felt perfect; happy people and peace. Like nothing could go wrong.

"Chica, it's a beautiful day, si?" asked the brunette.

"Yes," she answered, her (h/c) locks blowing in the breeze, "It's beautiful, Toni."

"Not as beautiful as you, mi querida." he replied flirtatiously, his dashing emerald green eyes playful.

        He always did this. The Spainard flirted with any girl, it was kind of disappointing. It hurt sometimes, but she had learned to brush it off.

        They both walked along, (Name)'s (e/c) orbs taking everything they saw. Trees, flowers, people. Then a voice cut in,

"Look, (Name), it's a churros stand!" exclaimed Antonio. "Let's get something to eat while we walk."

        He rushed over to the vendor like a little child being offered the last piece of candy. Purchasing two he said,

                                                                        "Here you go, carina."

        She took a bite into the sugary, cinammony goodness. It coated her lips. She repeated the action, neglecting to lick her lips. It was so delicious. Scrumptious. Tasty. Delectable. She could go on and on.

"You're really enjoying that churro, chica." smirked Antonio.

"It's so good, that's why. Yum." she responded, looking down to wipe crumbs off her clothes.

        When (Name) looked back up her lips met someone elses. She stared wide-eyed at her friend. He was kissing her?!
       
        His tongue licked her lips clean. Cleaning up ever last crumb. His lips were soft and she could still taste the hint of cinnamon. Just as soon as it started it stopped.
 
                                                                    "You had somehing there, chica."
                                                                                  "Is that so?"
                                                                                 "Si, (Name)."
 
 
                                                                  "Then you better clean me up."
 
                                                                                        

 

 

 

Just a story I had written a while back. This time with Spain! Enjoy!

Disclaimer:
I don't own Hetalia or you.
The plot is mine.
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:iconcherryblossemsakura0:
Every one is goin to kill me for this but what do curros taste like ive never had one
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neon-roses7 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013
A churro is fried dough that is shaped like a stick. It's covered in cinnamon and sugar. Some of them come with different fillings. Basically, it's delicious! (If you like sweets) I definitely recommend you try one when you have the chance.
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:iconcherryblossemsakura0:
Oh ok thanx
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neon-roses7 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
My pleasure.
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8ShiroYuki8 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013
*reads title* CHURROS~! :iconyayspainplz: there used to be a churro stand in a grocery store we go to sometimes, but it's been years since it was there :iconsadspainplz:
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neon-roses7 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
That's sad, I agree. Were the churros good there?
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8ShiroYuki8 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
yes, they were quite delicious.
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neon-roses7 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
That's even worse.:icontearyeyedplz:
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SilverMoon75 Featured By Owner May 28, 2013
That was cute! I liked the playful banter between the reader and Toni.
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neon-roses7 Featured By Owner May 28, 2013
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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SilverMoon75 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013
It was my pleasure.
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RandomPerson1011 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Student Writer
I LOVE CHURROS!!! There's a chocolate cafe in the city and there is churros there and you could dip it into ANY kind of chocolate which is DELICIOUS! But the city IS pretty far from where I live but I DONT CAREEEE
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CowSandwich230 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013
Haha same, not too long ago I went to an Italian restaurant and it was right near a churro place it was there I had my first churro and got addicted. :)
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neon-roses7 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013
That sounds sooooooo good right now.
I'm a chocoholic so I would be going crazy at that cafe.
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RandomPerson1011 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Student Writer
I LOVE chocolate... I'll eat any kind of chocolate there is
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neon-roses7 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013
Me too! Except for the ones with fruit fillings, those are gross. (To me at least)
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RandomPerson1011 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Student Writer
I actually are with you... I hate those kind of chocolate
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neon-roses7 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013
My grandma loves them, especially the fruit and nut Toblerone. In my head I'm all: "I don't need fruit to ruin my Toblerone."
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RandomPerson1011 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Student Writer
I also love ferrero rocher... They are delicious
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neon-roses7 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013
Ferrero rocher is delectable. I love all the different layers and textures. All this talk of chocolate is making me hungry. :iconhungryplz:
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Hime-Rin-san01 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013
I miss eating churros.. The churros stand near us had been taken away :iconbegplz:

Anyways I like your story hehe XD but his sudden reaction is quite uhmm.. o///o

should that be expected?

lol yeah I know I'm weird
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neon-roses7 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013
That's so sad. Why was it taken away?

Thanks!

I'm weird, too. That makes the two us.:)
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Hime-Rin-san01 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013
I don't know >..<

haha XD
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KanGiveHugs Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013
Oh Spain! How bold of you!
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neon-roses7 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013
Well, he is the country of passion.
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hetafan123 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013
:iconnosebleedingplz: i know whats happening next~!

I LOVED IT! :iconiloveitplz:
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neon-roses7 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013
I'm glad you liked it. Thanks!
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hetafan123 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013
NO problemo, senroita~!
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